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Writing and writers are a must...by Me. First draft!

11/04/14

"Writing and writers are a must"



   Writing is something that any person can do, but not every person can be a writer. So far, everything we know and have studied about the story and history of the Earth and our past generations, we owe it to all the writers that had always believed in the importance of writing and putting their knowledge and ideas into material that all the interested ones could acquire.

   Writings have also been for centuries, one of the most popular ways in which people expressed their feelings, passions or believes. Even though in the past, people used to deal with restrictions and even physical punishments for acquiring certain books that were considered potentially "disturbing" for that time, nowadays millions of these writings entertain the popularity in the entire world. Everyone can have access to a huge variety of writings of any kind, from old and ancient poems to new generation writing works uploaded in the Internet.


   In conclusion, writers and writings are a must since they have been part of the human raze, being them the only ones capable of producing and enjoying them. Books and writings will forever be a tool for students at school or maybe another path to relax at home.

First draft to work on....based on "The stages of the writing proces"


Ulises Misa
4th Year ISFD nº41


Reflection upon the “writing”


According to the steps in the writing process, instead of starting to compose straightforward, I should have considered any particular audience and purpose of the writing piece itself. In addition, I could not have begun the work without stating some main prewriting ideas to work on first. Moreover, bearing in mind the proper stages of the writing task, my work still remains in the drafting step and I would consider shaping and improving the introduction into a more interesting and solid one;  thus I may expand the conclusion in order to make it more purposeful and interesting. 

5 comentarios:

  1. Good analysis. Paragraphs are not so, I'm afraid. Pay attention to LENGHT of paragraphs>>>definition of paragr.

    stella :-)

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    1. Thanks :D ...and it is true! :S ....Length has not been enough to cover paragraphs. I would have to consider including more main ideas or expand the ones I already have, and finally pay more attention to the 4 featuers that according to theory a well built parragraph should embody. In conclusion, Stella is having fun with our silly first drafts :D and I can make a rap with that! U.U

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  2. Pay attention to the font colour, it´s rather uncomfortable to read.
    stella

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  3. DOne....had to try several convinations of colours since many seem to create the sick vision.

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